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* You should use a younger girl instead of a teenager
 - because of difficulty finding a suitable actress that we can film we had to change the character to a teenager. However a younger girl may be used for the home video footage as we will use one of our own childhood videos.

* Clown needs to be effective
 - We will do this by using make up effectively and using the correct lighting to reflect the clown.
 - by using a short flash of the image instead of a long one this will create more of a threat to the audience.
 - we will make the clown look different from the other objects in the room, this will create make the clown look more mysterious and threatening.

* Audience need to know what is happening while the lights go out
 - We will use sound to let the audience know what is happening, i.e doors creaking, footsteps etc.

* Develop the background story
 - we will put the toy clown in shot while the girl is playing so the audience can see the connection between them.

* You need to expand the film outside of one room
 - We have changed the narrative so that the story involves more than one room by making a ball roll out the door and therefore make the girl follow it.